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Unattended

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English Poetry

On the street corner
near the puddle
lying scattered, cookies
and grains unattended
by birds and stray dogs ;
They are just driven away
in hasty urbanization
and thoughtless hacking.
Should be ashamed
in this shoddy deal;
Pity!what a shoddy play!
piercing shady act.
xxxx

3 Comments

  1. Gion Gion says:

    A lifeless concrete jumbled jungle.
    Poignantly penned observation.
    Fergus

  2. Vishvnand says:

    Beautiful telling lines picturing
    the pervading cruel insensitivity & apathy.

    Commends

  3. medhini says:

    Highly grateful to you
    Gion& Vishvji.

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