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Got stuck

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English Poetry

Got stuck in the lift
in between the floors, high and low
as her onward journey of life,
while pursuing higher
and higher goals
leaves her dumb
and wonderstruck
revealing no traces of clue
where to go and how to proceed.
She is shaken a bit
as if life endorses slowly
to a standstill,unawares.

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7 Comments

  1. arshaj says:

    Very well.written.. Loved the lastline…. Very nice

  2. Vishvnand says:

    feelings and pondering penned beautifully
    on seemingly a common incident of lift malfunction…
    Liked very much…
    Commends

  3. bhupesh gupta says:

    beautiful parallel made between an impaired lift and the journey of life.

  4. kusumgokarn says:

    Good comparison of life’s journey to going up a lift & getting stuck mid way sometimes.
    But whoever goes up a lift has to come down to earth some time or another.
    Kusum

  5. medhini says:

    Thanks for reading and great
    comments…Arshaj, Vishvji,Bupesh
    and Kusumji..

  6. parminder says:

    Nice comparison. Indeed, who can fathom what lies in store! Beautifully expressed.

  7. medhini says:

    Thanks so much, Soniji for
    reading and kind comments.

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