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English Poetry |
Got stuck in the lift
in between the floors, high and low
as her onward journey of life,
while pursuing higher
and higher goals
leaves her dumb
and wonderstruck
revealing no traces of clue
where to go and how to proceed.
She is shaken a bit
as if life endorses slowly
to a standstill,unawares.
*****
Very well.written.. Loved the lastline…. Very nice
feelings and pondering penned beautifully
on seemingly a common incident of lift malfunction…
Liked very much…
Commends
beautiful parallel made between an impaired lift and the journey of life.
Good comparison of life’s journey to going up a lift & getting stuck mid way sometimes.
But whoever goes up a lift has to come down to earth some time or another.
Kusum
Thanks for reading and great
comments…Arshaj, Vishvji,Bupesh
and Kusumji..
Nice comparison. Indeed, who can fathom what lies in store! Beautifully expressed.
Thanks so much, Soniji for
reading and kind comments.