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Undying love

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English Poetry



I loved you in depth
greater than anything else
I love you now too.
But my love is like
condensed milk in a container
doesn’t flow to the sides.
It precipitates in my heart
placing you and I
in the large upper chambers
and off springs in the lower chambers.

Your heart is like a huge beehive
with honey, the essence of love
in million chambers
for billions, everywhere;
Muttered she.., you have placed me
in a large chamber of the comb
alluring to satisfy
my hunger for your love.
Hence I am dying…, dying
for your sweet, fragrant undying love.



  1. Kanchana Selvakumar says:

    Wow!What a tribute!We just started the day here in US.Happy Mother’s Day Valli Ma’m.

  2. Apurva Bharat Gaglani says:

    It is hard to believe that a woman can love a man.

    A woman may love her child a lot but her man, ah! which woman today would listen to him.

  3. kusumgokarn says:

    Enjoyed reading the unusual similes –
    Love like condensed milk.
    Heart like a huge bee hive.
    Savour the sweetness and fragrance as long as it lasts.
    Best wishes, Kusum

  4. Vishvnand says:

    Enticing picture of feelings of love within the family
    Captured in words and penned indeed very elegantly
    Liked immensely
    Hearty commends….

  5. rajdeep says:

    really a nice piece
    thanks ma’am

  6. parminder says:

    Amazing! The similes are so unusual, thus making the poem more interesting. The love shines out brilliantly!

  7. medhini says:

    Owe you a lot for these great
    comments, Sonijee..

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