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Undying love
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English Poetry |
HAPPY MOTHERS’ DAY
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I loved you in depth
greater than anything else
I love you now too.
But my love is like
condensed milk in a container
doesn’t flow to the sides.
It precipitates in my heart
placing you and I
in the large upper chambers
and off springs in the lower chambers.
Your heart is like a huge beehive
with honey, the essence of love
in million chambers
for billions, everywhere;
Muttered she.., you have placed me
in a large chamber of the comb
alluring to satisfy
my hunger for your love.
Hence I am dying…, dying
for your sweet, fragrant undying love.
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Wow!What a tribute!We just started the day here in US.Happy Mother’s Day Valli Ma’m.
Thanks,Kanchana. How long u will be in US?
Go for sight seeing to gain for
creativity.
It is hard to believe that a woman can love a man.
A woman may love her child a lot but her man, ah! which woman today would listen to him.
Don’t be so pessimistic about
women, Apurva.Thanks for reading
and comments..
Medhini,
Enjoyed reading the unusual similes –
Love like condensed milk.
Heart like a huge bee hive.
Savour the sweetness and fragrance as long as it lasts.
Best wishes, Kusum
Thanks for liking the poem
and comments, Kusumji..
Enticing picture of feelings of love within the family
Captured in words and penned indeed very elegantly
Liked immensely
Hearty commends….
Thanks for liking and
kind comments,Vishvjji..
really a nice piece
thanks ma’am
Thanks so much,Deep.
Amazing! The similes are so unusual, thus making the poem more interesting. The love shines out brilliantly!
Owe you a lot for these great
comments, Sonijee..