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the careful eye
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Anthology 2013 Entries, English Poetry, Uncategorized |
death makes immortal
and immortals die,
by the static lakes,
under the moving sky.
i cut with dispassion,
in ribbons this picture,
no ribbon like another,
all alike without the other.
picture makes ribbons,
ribbons make picture,
in time which is which,
to the careless i?
as the lake moves,
skies stand still,
to the lake tears flow,
of the careful eye.
Rohan,
great imagery.
A very intense feel. Well thought and written.
Fergus
thanks fergus..
Liked the poem much
for the style in which it is conveying the lovely muse…!
Commends
thanks vishvanand..
“death makes immortal
and immortals die,”
Lovely poem,Rohan.
thank you, medhini..