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to a foreign land..

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Anthology 2013 Entries, English Poetry, Uncategorized

if i can’t swim a thousand seas,
tell me why should i swim at all?
if a thousand curves won’t break a line,
why should the curve risk a fall?
if foreign lands are foreign no more
and in the homeland a home nowhere,
why should i travel home tell me?
to a foreign land.. to a foreign land..

2 Comments

  1. Vishvnand says:

    Nice poem for what it tends to elegantly convey
    Liked much.
    Commends …..!

    Yes, what can one do when at Home you feel like a foreigner & at home in Foreign …! 🙁

    BTW Kindly do read the posting https://www.p4poetry.com/2013/08/07/r-a-t-i-n-g-s/ on the subject of Rating….

  2. rohanrathod says:

    thank you sir,
    for your kind comments..
    and about the other comment, yes it is true that the desire to be read gets the best of me, more often than i know. i agree fully that one has to transcend the logic of ratings imposed by the medium of communication itself. rest assured that i shall do the needful from now on.

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