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ADAM AND EVE
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Who said Adam was first;
how come his ugly bone became
the loveliest Eve
Trash, trash, trash!
The collected heap
of selective grace
of universe is woman!
She’s the First of all;
the green of the earth,
the blue of the sky,
the fluidity of water.
the brightness of light
and the chill of winds!
Never thinks a man
how he stumbled
on to this earth
sans the Holy Womb
spitting him out.
Yet man turned
and rules the world
while the Generatrix
remained a sunken humbleness!
Shame, shame, shame!
theory of genesis revisited! its true,world sans women will not be worth living for menfolk.
Thanks my poet friend. You took it in right sense.
Very forceful volley of strong words upholding a woman’s dignity & respect.
Kusum.
Thank u so much Kusum
Enlightening empathy & feelings in this beautifully impacting poem and the content
Wisdom should rule & this malaise of superiority of one over the other should rightfully be extinct…
Hearty commends for the emphatic manner of presentation
Respected Visvnandji, you have always been very kind and magnanimous in praise. Many thanks Sir. You are a true lover of poetry and you know the true sense of “rasa
aaswadan”
anuradha,..Your’s is indeed a profoundly encouraging appreciation of commenting. I am greatly delighted, unable to express in words the feeling of esteem within.
very impacting with the forceful use of words. So true too. Loved it. Wish the male ego would take a back seat once and for all and the gender discrimination becomes history.