My full name is Sushil Sarna and date of birth is 2nd August,1951. I belong to Punjabi culture. I have cleared Graduation in 1970. I am retired from Central Government Service. My wife is my best critic and has has always encouraged me for writing the poems. This sense was developed during my college period. I was always praised for my poems by my friend circle. Later, in my family I was supported for this passion and also in my office. But clearly speaking I never tried to get my poems to be published any where. This site has given me a birth as poet though I still think that I don't know the poetry but after reading the comments, I feel that there are persons who recognize my poetry.
What should I write more about myself. I am a very simple and nature loving person.A very sentimental person. Sometime I feel tears at the time of making some poetry.This is my brief introduction.Thanks.
I am a resident of Jaipur-the Pink City.
Published books :
1. Passion for Poetry (Joint publication)Manjul Parkashan
2. Humsafar (self poetry published by Mandvi Parkashan),Gaziabad
3. Akshron kee oat se (Joint ) published by shuktika prakashan, Kolkata
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अज़ीज़ों की तरह …
हमने चाहा है तुम्हें ….अपने नसीबों की तरह
……दे गये हमको दगा …तुम भी हबीबों की तरह
………अपने हाथों की लकीरों पे …अब यकीं ही नहीं
…………अश्क पलकों में रहते हैं अब अज़ीज़ों की तरह
सुशील सरना
achchhi lines
More over I got inspired by your lines and wrote-
दे गए हमको दग़ा तुम भी हबीबों की तरह
हमनवा समझा मगर निकले रक़ीबों की तरह
हमने कोशिश तो कोई कम न बदलने की की
तुम तो बदले ही नहीं अपने नसीबों की तरह
जो भी इशरत थी हमारी, थी तुम्हारे दम से
अब जो तुम ही न रहे बैठे गरीबों की तरह
और भी दर्द को दुगुना तो नहीं करना था,
आप आये थे अगर पास तबीबों की तरह।
कील दर कील ज़मीरों में ठुँकी सच्चाई
है बदन अपना खड़ा जैसे सलीबों की तरह।
Thanks a lot Sir for ur so nice comment and laajwaab gazal…Sir will u please tell me than Habeebon and Rakeebon is correct…I have got a comment from some other site that ahabaab is plural of habeeb not habeebon…and rakeeboon is also not bahuvachan of rakeeb….I am confused…pl help me…u have also used the same words in ur present gazal….thanks SINGH saahib
I think both forms are correct just as alfaaz and lafzon both are plural of lafz. Moreover, when we write in Hindi we should follow Hindi Grammer, for example we write stationon and not stations.
Thanks for favorable reply SINGH saahib.