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The Killing Knives….!
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English Poetry |
Had many times mocked at,
those meritorious poets,
for equating;
the eyes of a girl,
with attractive magnets!
But now,
I have become an iron!
Her eyes are
abstaining me,
to step away from her!
I had even poked at,
those prevalent poets,
for collating;
the eyes of a lassie,
with fin-less fishes!
But now,
I have become the prey!
Her eyes are
sucking my life,
but still I am alive!
Now,I would compare,
the eyes of my chick,
with the killing knives!
They deeply runs through,
my four-chambered heart,
tearing it to pieces!
WOW… Strongly written. Lets hope those knives penetrate deep enough…
Very nice read. Keep penning… Arsh.
Thank you so much,Sir!
Superb…..
Thankiee:)
You have been improving very fast as a poet, Aarthika. Very strong feeling expressed here in a very gentle way. Enjoyed it! Thanks for this post!! Keep writing!
Stimulating comments!Thank u,Mam 🙂
Aarthika, you have improved a lot as a poet. I’ve enjoyed very attractive emotional poem here. Thanks for the post!